The story of Rha

[Rha]

For people who don't want to read it, in short it is a "I was killed" thread. I wonder who did this and if there was any reason or I just cross your way. Anyway, here is my story, sorry for bad english.

Rha wasn't afraid of people, but this time he felt something is wrong. "Aggroed!" he thought when he heard a coin sound and he was right. He boated to the place where he could do the circles and wait for his strong friend, but unfortunately only one person that couldn't fight was ready to help. Rha asked to block two aggressors but it didn't work, so he decided to stock coins, stand on the ground and fight till the end.
Rha run to the beach hoping to split griefers and it worked, one of them wanted to cut his path, but Rha run into woods with a ranger on his back. Rha had to kill him quick, so he blocked the opponent with a shield and attacked with a blade. Chances were equal both fighters were more or less at same level, but Rha had more coins and decided to use a trick to get the advanage and fill attack bar. He was ready before enemy, but this time Rha used fists. Blood on the ground, fear in ranger's eyes, a short run, and one quick cut knocked down first one.
While Rha's executing the final blow the second of his opponents was behind him. One punch almost found Rha's face, wow. Rha run to a boat where his friend was waiting, jumped and said "STOP!". He wasn't a coward and he decided to end what was started. After regenerating his bars, Rha striked, but second fighter was way to strong, two punches and Rha felt blood in his mouth. Another run to boat, refilling bars. Plan was simple, equal advantage weight and run to the woods, it worked once, it must work this time. Rha did what he thought, he wanted to sting when the enemy had his guard down while moving, but this man was too smart for that trick.
"Stop running!", "Who are you?!" shouted the man who wanted to kill Rha. Rha knew restlessness is his chance, so he asked a friend from the boat to come closer to the battle on an alt. As Rha thought, alt was brutally KOed. Rha run straight to his enemy with a Valorous Strike, than refill attack in one move and hit again. The tough guy was almost hit and tough guy had to concern on defence. Rha marked running to cofuse him even more, but suddenly used punch to hit unexpecting rogue. This made hunter being hunted, but the chase was short. Rha saw his enemy crossing water, so he decided to do the same. But evil forces grabbed his hand with a waterflask so he couldn't drink and Rha was in the river with half of his stamina. Last things Rha saw was magic force putting him knocked down on the shore and cold blade in his chest. "A good death" he heard, a whisper from a valkyrie that came to show him a way to Valhalla.

[Kitamie]

That was a pretty good story, well done.

[HasseKebab]

i don't laik the way you wrote this.


Dill wrote this:
''Good fight, and nice story. We actually thoguht that you were someone else . I got one picture for the boat chase when it first started that ill send to one of my friends to post later. Sucks that i died ''

[Phaen]

Although the spelling/grammar/formatting is off, this is actually pretty well written. I like the way you describe the combat moves!

I hope you don't mind, but may I rewrite it for readability?

Rha wasn't afraid of people, but this time he felt something was wrong. "Aggroed!" he thought when he heard a coin sound - and he was right. He boated to a place where he could do circles and wait for a strong friend, but unfortunately the only person ready to help was not a warrior. Rha tried to block his two aggressors but it didn't work, so he decided to stack coins, stand his ground and fight 'til the end.

Rha ran to the beach hoping to split the griefers and it worked. One of them wanted to cut his path, but instead Rha ran into the woods with a ranger on his tail. Rha had to kill him quick, so he blocked the opponent with a shield and attacked with a blade. Chances were equal - both fighters were more or less at the same level, but Rha had more coins and decided to use a trick to get the advantage and fill his attack bar. He was ready before his enemy, but this time Rha used fists. Blood on the ground, fear in the ranger's eyes, a short run, and one quick cut knocked down the first one.

While Rha executed the final blow, the second of his opponents was behind him. One punch almost found Rha's face, wow. Rha ran to a boat where his friend was waiting, jumped in and said "STOP!" He wasn't a coward and he decided to end what was started. After regenerating his bars, Rha struck, but the second fighter was way too strong. Two punches and Rha felt blood in his mouth. Another run to the boat, refilling bars. The plan was simple: restore equal advantage weight and run to the woods. It worked once, it must work this time. Rha followed his plan. He wanted to sting when the enemy had his guard down while moving, but this man was too smart for that trick.

"Stop running! Who are you?!" shouted the man who wanted to kill Rha. Rha knew restlessness was his chance, so he asked the friend from the boat to come closer to the battle on an alt. As Rha thought, the alt was brutally knocked out. Rha ran straight to his enemy with a Valorous Strike, then refilled the attack bar in one move and hit again. The tough guy was forced to switch to a defensive stance to avoid being cut. Rha began running to confuse him even more, but suddenly used punch to hit the unsuspecting rogue. The hunter became the hunted, but the chase was short. Rha saw his enemy crossing the water. He decided to do the same, but evil forces grabbed his hand so he couldn't drink from his waterflask. Rha was in the river with half of his stamina. The last thing Rha saw was a magic force drawing him to the shore, and cold blade in his chest.

"A good death" he heard. It was a whisper from a Valkyrie come to show him the way to Valhalla.

[HasseKebab]

valhalla awaits viking brother.
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=iwGNPohAD_0

[dagrimreefah]

Great story, well told.

[TheTylerLee]

First sentence, i was able to read

After that i just seen a massive wall of text and gave up ;/

[staz]

Although the spelling/grammar/formatting is off, this is actually pretty well written. I like the way you describe the combat moves!

I hope you don't mind, but may I rewrite it for readability?

Rha wasn't afraid of people, but this time he felt something was wrong. "Aggroed!" he thought when he heard a coin sound - and he was right. He boated to a place where he could do circles and wait for a strong friend, but unfortunately the only person ready to help was not a warrior. Rha tried to block his two aggressors but it didn't work, so he decided to stack coins, stand his ground and fight 'til the end.

Rha ran to the beach hoping to split the griefers and it worked. One of them wanted to cut his path, but instead Rha ran into the woods with a ranger on his tail. Rha had to kill him quick, so he blocked the opponent with a shield and attacked with a blade. Chances were equal - both fighters were more or less at the same level, but Rha had more coins and decided to use a trick to get the advantage and fill his attack bar. He was ready before his enemy, but this time Rha used fists. Blood on the ground, fear in the ranger's eyes, a short run, and one quick cut knocked down the first one.

While Rha executed the final blow, the second of his opponents was behind him. One punch almost found Rha's face, wow. Rha ran to a boat where his friend was waiting, jumped in and said "STOP!" He wasn't a coward and he decided to end what was started. After regenerating his bars, Rha struck, but the second fighter was way too strong. Two punches and Rha felt blood in his mouth. Another run to the boat, refilling bars. The plan was simple: restore equal advantage weight and run to the woods. It worked once, it must work this time. Rha followed his plan. He wanted to sting when the enemy had his guard down while moving, but this man was too smart for that trick.

"Stop running! Who are you?!" shouted the man who wanted to kill Rha. Rha knew restlessness was his chance, so he asked the friend from the boat to come closer to the battle on an alt. As Rha thought, the alt was brutally knocked out. Rha ran straight to his enemy with a Valorous Strike, then refilled the attack bar in one move and hit again. The tough guy was forced to switch to a defensive stance to avoid being cut. Rha began running to confuse him even more, but suddenly used punch to hit the unsuspecting rogue. The hunter became the hunted, but the chase was short. Rha saw his enemy crossing the water. He decided to do the same, but evil forces grabbed his hand so he couldn't drink from his waterflask. Rha was in the river with half of his stamina. The last thing Rha saw was a magic force drawing him to the shore, and cold blade in his chest.

"A good death" he heard. It was a whisper from a Valkyrie come to show him the way to Valhalla.

Hugs Phaen! Hi!

[Phaen]

Hey there! How are you and how is Cublan? I'm surprised I haven't seen him open up a trading shop yet on the forums

[Rha]

As I said, my english isn't so good, so if Phaen don't mind, I could use his text.

HasseKebab, was it you and Dill? You were the bear cape guy? If yes, then you have nice ua.