Add more to the pre burning in tutorial. People take for granted what,they have learned over the many years of experience.
Maybe use this topic to make a list of "things I'd wish have known before I burned in"
The tutorial also need to have pop up text that tells you specifically how things you are being asked to do are to be done. Like the pop up telling go left to make a female character, or right to make a Male one. Add another pop up that says "Go to the pond to select a a shitty hair/beard style and colour."
Another that says "right click the tree and select branch" when you collect a branch another pop up that says "congratulations you have made a discovery, no here's what that means and what happens" basically take the started quest and give them pop-ups that explain in more detail. But also give a way to opt out for those who know already.
I would also add an important part is to make a person fight an animal and lose and explain KO vs death. So it's very clear of the danger. And how it effects you. I know it's written in the game description but people aint going yo read it and understsnd what it means untill they experience it in a controled environment.
The lack of this type of guided new player tutorial is going to be the number one negative review
Things I think should be explained better:
Discovery
How to craft
Attributes and how you get them FEP
Abilities and how you get them LP
Skills and how you gain them
Kith and kin menu
Energy
Hunger
Basic combat
KO and Death
And add a gosh darn link to the wiki