needs to be hummed with jingle bells

by **NOOBY93** » Wed Dec 25, 2013 4:29 pm

i dress up like a girl
i have a manly skype voice
i like to hunt bears
and choke my chickens
its my choice
o crap there is a troll
and jordon is hunting me
why did i piss off
the land of DIS and
all of fuckin AD

Rhythm is a bit off.
Here's how it should go:

i Dress up like a Girl.
i Have a manly Voice.
i Like to hunt bears And choke chicken It is my Choice.
oh Crap there is a Troll
and Jordan's hunting Me why did i
Piss off the land Of dis and all Of fuckin' aD. oooh

I capitalized where the half-meter thingies should go. like, you hit your hand up and down on the capitalized letters.
The last part goes a bit quicker.
"and Jordan's hunting Me why did i
Piss off the land Of dis and all Of fuckin' aD. oooh"
These are 16-meters, all of them, except D (in AD) and oooh (before H&H).
"i Like to hunt bears And choke chicken It is my Choice." same here. All 16's except my and choice. My = 8, choice = 4.

What I edited here, gives it an extremely nice-sounding flow, instead of the "how do I say this" of the original. The song's epic, btw.

by **Bossy** » Wed Dec 25, 2013 4:36 pm

Great song.
Nooby93 wonder what would happened if you once woudn't post. Write your own song

would be fun read more.
BTW happy xmas to all.

by **TrooPeRZz** » Wed Dec 25, 2013 6:16 pm

I'M TELLING JORDAN

by **Tonkyhonk** » Wed Dec 25, 2013 6:21 pm

TrooPeRZz wrote:I'M TELLING JORDAN

op is only scared of it being read by JORDON.

by **NOOBY93** » Wed Dec 25, 2013 6:36 pm

Bossy wrote:Great song.
Nooby93 wonder what would happened if you once woudn't post. Write your own song would be fun read more.
BTW happy xmas to all.

Kinda ironic, since you posted as well, except I contributed unlike you.
See what I did there?

by **SgtCayir** » Wed Dec 25, 2013 10:46 pm

song was fine without ur "editing" nooby fuk off

by **jordancoles** » Thu Dec 26, 2013 2:03 am

Nice one

by **NOOBY93** » Thu Dec 26, 2013 8:01 am

SgtCayir wrote:song was fine without ur "editing" nooby fuk off

I'm the only one who gave some actual criticism except
"Nice song."
"Nicer than nice."
"GOODER THAN GOOD"
"GOODIER THAN GOOD"
"VERY GOOD"
"MUCH MORE GOODER"
Seriously, though, what a circlejerk forum.

by **Dzedajus** » Thu Dec 26, 2013 9:58 pm

NOOBY93 wrote:Seriously, though, what a circlejerk forum.

This forums mainly consists of normalfags/moralfags, goody-2-shoes and faggots. Others are social misfits like you and me, shitposters and retards.

Also the song is garbage that sux shit.

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