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Re: My first Animation

Postby borka » Mon Jul 07, 2014 1:45 am

understanding in hearing sense ;)

maybe you can post the text here ?!? (so i can train my listening skills too ;) )

and btw. Hey Arnold! was running on german Tv too http://de.wikipedia.org/wiki/Hey_Arnold!
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Re: My first Animation

Postby GrapefruitV » Mon Jul 07, 2014 1:47 am

It's not the language, it's sound and pronounce, which are impossible to understand. From those 3 words I could hear I got that it is about grandpa fucking arnold. Paedophilia is a great theme for jokes (no sarcasm involved), but that's not funny at all. Oh wow known character from our childhood is a peado, LELELELEl. No, it just doesn't work like that. Maybe there are some funny remarks burried under the noise, but we can only guess.
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Re: My first Animation

Postby TeckXKnight » Mon Jul 07, 2014 3:17 am

Gacrux wrote:Thanks for watching it guys I appreciate the feedback and the helpful critiques. I'm sorry non natives could not understand it but like stated on the video description it is a parody of a cartoon so if you haven't seen Hey Arnold then you wouldn't understand it.

'It's shit' is a valuable critique too and you have to understand that. Imagine a scale of 1 to 10 that people can score your work off of, where 1 is worst and 10 is best. Now reimagine that scale from 1 to 10 to Pass or Fail. Pass is a 1 and Fail is a 0. 'It's shit' is a 0 and, for any number of reasons, you didn't strike anything valuable or meaningful in terms of humor.

There is no one right way to do humor and experimentation is valuable to everyone, but there are definitely wrong ways to do humor.
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Re: My first Animation

Postby dagrimreefah » Mon Jul 07, 2014 8:11 am

Total garbage. Try animating more than just eyeballs/actually have some clear sound that doesn't sound like it was recorded by a toaster next time buddy.
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Re: My first Animation

Postby Arcanist » Mon Jul 07, 2014 12:57 pm

Yep, pretty horrible animation, I am a native english speaker, and I grew up on Hey Arnold!
But I couldn't make sense of it, and from the bits I could hear/see I didn't want to understand any more.

Good job for getting into animation, you did better than I could do, but as has been said, for an 'animation' try to animate more than just eyes/nose and it might be a bit more impressive.
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