The Havens

[zacty]

(Was the man suppose to be a russian or a american?)

you'll be finding that out later

Serious question: are you dyslexic?

not that im aware of, no

[Zou]

The last part you posted was much better, in terms of organization and grammar. The story so far is great. Keep writing!

[zacty]

some more i just type up, hope you like my graphics



sorry about the typos by the way, some of them just slip through.

[Associate]

cool

[zacty]

well since the server is down...

He stood up again, and looked around this new area, the trees here were different, some of them bearing fruits or seeds, others large and strong. He saw one tree with red fruits
growing on it, and decided to try one. He approached the tree and plucked the fruit from the tree and bit into it. It was sweet, and very soft on the inside. He finished the food
and plucked more that he could reach, and ended up with six apples. He looked around some more, how far had he ran? there were no other trees nearby like the ones by the strange
fire. He wandered around a little bit, trying to remember the direction he had come from, when he heared someone, or something, coming towards him. frightened, he hid in a nearby bush,
expecting another heavily armed person to come by. but that was not the case, the person who emereged was wearing a bushy green shirt, pants like the ones markus had, and was holding
and axe much like His. He was bending down every now and again to pick different plants. After watching this man for a few minutes, Markus decided to step out and greet him.
He took a step out from behind his cover. The man noticed him imediatly, and for a moment a look of terror flashed through his eyes, but was almost immediatly gone. Markus smiled and
waved "hello!" he called out. The man walked over to Markus and replied "hello, who are you, you look new." He looked at markus quizically "my name is Markus, and yes i am new here,
what is this place?" Markus asked. "well, i suppose you can call it what you like, but most people tend to call it the havens, kind of its unofficial name i guess, im Johnathan, and
its a pleasure to see another friendly face around here." they both smiled, then Markus asked "have you seen anyone around with some metal armour and a sword? someone walked into
my camp yesterday wearing that." John thought for a second, looking worried. "not that i remember, but keep an eye out, those people can be very mean, id steer clear of them if i were
you." Markus nodded his head "hey if you ever need anything, or have any questions let me know, i can help you out." Johnathan said. "but hey, i have to go, take care." He took a few
steps back before Markus replied "thanks, you too! thanks for the information." He smiled and John turned and left, leaving Markus right back where he started.

sorry about the text wall, just got up and dont really want to deal with MS paint right now..

[min_the_fair]

Oh goodness, I'd forgotten about this.

I said: paragraphs plz.
You heard: graphics plz.

I facepalmed so hard that I gave myself a headache, and didn't feel bitchy enough to link you to a definition of the word 'paragraph'. So now you're going back to 'guyz read my stuffs even though I can't be bothered to fix my line breaks'.

[zacty]

Oh goodness, I'd forgotten about this.

I said: paragraphs plz.
You heard: graphics plz.

I facepalmed so hard that I gave myself a headache, and didn't feel bitchy enough to link you to a definition of the word 'paragraph'. So now you're going back to 'guyz read my stuffs even though I can't be bothered to fix my line breaks'.

oh, well uh.... i uh....

shit

[min_the_fair]

sorry dude.

[Zou]

Yeah, paragraphs and proper grammar make the story so much nicer.

[Onionfighter]

You write in the opposite way as nao. I'm not reading it until there are some paragraphs. So yeah, nice letter rectangles.