by RustyBuckitt » Tue Feb 17, 2015 7:31 am Phinix wrote:I don't mind the people on here and you are more than welcome to proofread it.
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#4: The field of unknown
As he woke up, he couldn't believe his eyes, he was still alive, but in a place he has never seen before, with trees over populating the area, and grass every where Jason looks. He starts walking for awhile and finds nothing at all, and desires to set up camp for the night.
As he tries to remember what happened in his unconscious state of mind, all he can (you going with past, or present tense?) remember is being dragged off by someone.
As he lays on the ground wondering what happened, and what Jason did to make the others so hostile. He must have stumbled upon something others where not supposed to know of.
That night, he had a hard time sleeping, from mostly hunger and knowing hardly anything about what happened, as he fell asleep under the stars in the grass.
The very next morning, he decided the put the past behind him, and start doing things himself, he started to hunt and forage different things to cook and use to improve his camp. As he made it to a river, he found a nice fishing area with an abundance of fish to catch.
After a few hours he headed back to his camp site, and made some adjustments, making it seem a little more like home.
After a dinner of fish, he thought it wasn't so bad that he was left in the wilderness, but it still boggled his mind as to what was going on.
End part 4
Editing courtesy of RustyBuckitt, feel free to add upon this.
