Saif's Rap, Haven & Hearth Hermit! (Official album release!)

[TheTylerLee]

okay so if you see my previous post i said i would make a lil rap

this took about 30 minutes, Most raps take days to perfect so dont expect anything great ;/



HnH Rap

Wake up with LP in the millions, Strait to the curio's i begin refilling
Run outta room in my study bar, Maximum capacity I guess i like to study hard

Time to leave the saftey of my Vualt, As soon as i port out a voice screams "HALT"

I reply with an arrow to the knee, I leave the murder scent for all to see


This is extortion, Ill kill your next Gen Character before you make it like abortion
How many shots does it take ? just one. This is just fun
keep reading tho cause im not done

I drive strait to ainran, Everyone tells me "hey your a madman!
That place is nothing but bad man, if you go you wont come back and...."

Bitch im batman, I Slapp-em wit the Backhand


Well lets be honest, i was just spotted,

4v1 They think they got me, But My speed is Frightning,
Sound travels behind me, Oops i got caught on a tree
RIP TheTylerLee

Lol i make this rap, 5 mins later 2 ainrans are outside my BW

[Flame]

but...why you always die in your raps..? XD

[TheTylerLee]

but...why you always die in your raps..? XD

Cause if i brag about not dieng And being rich ( like i did the first week of W6)

then i get hunted down lol

[Phaen]

I'd rather see him videotape himself rapping a much better rap.

Oh god--- potjeh? I want to try ruining this one. How do I know where which word is on / off the beat?

[TheTylerLee]

I'd rather see him videotape himself rapping a much better rap.

Oh god--- potjeh? I want to try ruining this one. How do I know where which word is on / off the beat?

if your gonna sing it make your own beat to it, it will be impossible to know his beat,..,..


Also you can change small words to make it sound better

[jordancoles]

Stay on topic guys, comment on the rap.

Your rap is bad and you should feel bad.



7 DAYS

[Phaen]

http://soundcloud.com/phaen/potjeh-hnh-rap

did my best, heh


edit:

modified lyrics:

You say you got a girlfriend... for real
You play together Haven... big deal
I ain't got no girlfriend but I got my bitches
They all come to admire my H&H riches
So many come to my crib I ain't keeping score
Had to equip my mansion with revolving doors
Now I boot up my Haven on my plasma screen
They all pinch together thinking “it's a dream”
Then I say it's real, and they get all wet
Cause my stats are crazy and my loot is phat
You proclaim you're rich, nigga please
You still eat ants while I roll in cheese
And my cows are all q nine gees and eight
My bitches serve their cheese on a golden plate
I sip my wine from a goblet of pearl
Got forks to match, I live like an earl
You got … a wooden cup and a... wooden fork
Ain't got no grinder so you eat roast pork
Here I’m living like a goddamn superstar
Smoking the world's best bud with Jorb and Loftar
You can't compete, I'm on a rapping spree
So better pack your wagon and make like a tree
Oh wait, you can't, you just have a cart
You're gonna keep it off the road if you're smart
‘Cause when my wagon's silver wheels come a spinning
You might as well go... and buy swimming
'Cause when I do a drive-by I never miss
My ranger bow kills all who diss
No con, no armor gonna do ya no good
'Cause My bow's got the highest damn q in the hood
Don't care if you wanna rap, bitch you're done
You better run... before you’re griefed to world one

[btaylor]

http://soundcloud.com/phaen/potjeh-hnh-rap

did my best, heh

Couldn't stop myself from smiling. Well done. Would be even better if there were some song to go with it.

[TheTylerLee]

http://soundcloud.com/phaen/potjeh-hnh-rap

did my best, heh

Good Job Seriously

[Saif_Mahlik]

Nothing about this thread is against the rules, no?

No its not And nothing I have done is against the rules Come on man....