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Sacagawiener's Trek

Postby Gh0stw0lf » Mon Dec 20, 2010 1:19 am

*Mods If this isn't in the right thread feel free to move it.

The smell of pine trees is enough to wake me from my slumber in the woods, I feel large tender spot on my head. I gingerly touch it and realize I don't know where I am. My past is a hazy and tumultuous one. I never knew my father, perhaps that is the reason I turned out this way, lost and without a home. I soon notice that the sun is beginning to set, I apparently slept all day, and hastily I begin to grab branches off trees to make my fire for the night and to ward off boars or worse, bears.

The crackling of the fire starts as soon as the sun sets. "Perfect Timing" I think to myself as I hold some rabbit flesh over the open flame to eat for the night. As i the flesh cooks I begin to wonder about my situation and I how I came to get lost in the woods, separated from my brother. My brother...He is 5 years younger than me, scarcely old enough to fend for himself much less fight off a boar. It was at that exact moment I hear a crashing sound in the woods, startled I grab the nearest thing next to me to use as a weapon, my stone axe. As the crashing subsided, the silence after the noise was overwhelming and deafening as my imagination ran wild with what could have caused the sound. I had heard stories about ruthless murderers, speaking in strange tongue they call "Russian" pillaging entire villages and killing everyone. As my thoughts ran amok in my head, I scarcely noticed the figure appearing from the shadows. First the black nose protruded then the black, beady eyes followed by the immense body the size of a cabin. It was a bear.

I stayed breathless for a few moments and then in a flash, I turned and ran for my life into the forest. I could hear the monster behind me rampaging through the woods in its effort to catch me knocking down small trees and tearing through anything else unlucky enough to get in its way. As I ran, I could feel my legs giving out underneath me getting me closer to the maw of death behind me. It was at the moment I heard the light running of water. 'WATER!' I almost screamed out delirious with hope, if I could get there and swim far enough away sure enough the damned bear would lose interest! As I approached the source of the sound, it turned out to be a river but either way I could go far enough in and lose the bear. The thought no sooner crossed my head when I felt four sharp claws dig into my back and rip my linen shirt. The pain was overwhelming and I dropped to my knees in agony, the bear had finally caught me, I rolled over to face my death when I saw the bear going for the death bite when I hear a loud crack and the bear comes crashing down nearly on top of me. Dead.

Though my vision was blurred from the pain I managed to see the silhouette of my savior standing to the distance with a bow in his hands. I reach up weakly to thank him but then I black out.

Damn bear.

**This is the story of my 2nd character (if you hadn't guessed that) Sacagawiener and his start in the world to where I am now. Obviously its told from a certain point a view and much more descriptive to make it more interesting but this is my story. I will be updating daily so just tell me how you all like it and any improvements, thanks. ;)**
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Re: Sacagawiener's Trek

Postby sabinati » Mon Dec 20, 2010 2:09 am

moved to the inn
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Re: Sacagawiener's Trek

Postby Tacheron » Sun Dec 26, 2010 4:06 am

Nice story, man :)
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Re: Sacagawiener's Trek

Postby aso11 » Sun Dec 26, 2010 5:56 am

*likes* Novel idea, but are you srsly going to update every day?
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Re: Sacagawiener's Trek

Postby Agarrett » Sun Dec 26, 2010 8:24 am

... I woke up to an ominous figure standing over me. He held a golden bow with an easy tone of voice. "My MM is over 9000!"
"W-What? What is MM? Who are you?" I stumbled over the words, scared by the harsh look on his face.

He took the bow, pointed it at me, and shot an arrow into my chest. The last thing I remember seeing was him removing my linen pants and placing them in a cupboard full of various other trousers...

I awoke in a strange room, that was some how familiar, I was without form, just a spirit floating, but I could sense others in the room, strange ones covered in garments never invented and strange. There was a chest, and I was above a pool, and there was something new. A runestone, covered with words.





We should make this one of those stories each person continues on in a post. If not, just ignore this post, I just thought it would be funny to mention.
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Re: Sacagawiener's Trek

Postby Gary458 » Sun Dec 26, 2010 1:39 pm

I was in a village having a good time being only me and my friend usually on. Then it hit me when pyr8 was taken over.Fort rawrz will be next, We packed up our oxcart and set out, until xweetok killed the cow. oh yeah WE HAD A BACK UP. We grabbed the calf and went on our way to starting a new mini southern nople so southern people wouldn't have to travel that far. I met 5 people yesterday and they all wanted a bar of metal each for their mansion. I said "got any linen?'' their leader said no currently they made linen crates which was smart but after that I went back to a good place and made 2 more cast iron.
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Re: Sacagawiener's Trek

Postby aso11 » Sun Dec 26, 2010 11:29 pm

Agarrett wrote:... I woke up to an ominous figure standing over me. He held a golden bow with an easy tone of voice. "My MM is over 9000!"
"W-What? What is MM? Who are you?" I stumbled over the words, scared by the harsh look on his face.

He took the bow, pointed it at me, and shot an arrow into my chest. The last thing I remember seeing was him removing my linen pants and placing them in a cupboard full of various other trousers...

I awoke in a strange room, that was some how familiar, I was without form, just a spirit floating, but I could sense others in the room, strange ones covered in garments never invented and strange. There was a chest, and I was above a pool, and there was something new. A runestone, covered with words.





We should make this one of those stories each person continues on in a post. If not, just ignore this post, I just thought it would be funny to mention.

<3 I like the reference.
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Koya: What means "molest" ? Translator cannot translate it or do it with no logics...
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Re: Sacagawiener's Trek

Postby Gh0stw0lf » Wed Jan 05, 2011 11:07 pm

When I woke I saw a bear carcass not too far away, just the furry skin was enough to frighten me. I pushed myself up with my elbows and looked around for my savior. I saw him sitting not far away on the riverbank, apparently collecting some river mussels. I call to thank him and it’s clear that he does not speak my language as he just nods and says something back in an odd tongue. Unsure of what to do, I dust my clothes off from the grass and dirt and begin walking down the river bank to some hub of civilization or a trader outpost so I could find some new clothes, armor and weapons.
As my journey continued, I noticed the flora along the river bank growing thicker and thicker more devoid of human life with each step; I was both relieved and worried upon noticing this because while it meant that bandits would most likely not be travelling the road it also meant that the creatures of the forest would grow more and more savage. My mind raced as I thought of another bear attack and I scarcely noticed that dusk was setting. I went ahead and set up a small camp on the riverbank and quickly fell asleep.


****Sorry for the late update, I was on holiday**** WIll continue to update everyday now.
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