by zacty » Fri Aug 26, 2011 10:06 pm 
Where am i? what is this palce? The man opened his baby-blue eyes for the first time. he could remember nothing before this, or if there had indeed been anything before this at all. He looked up and around, he was in a cave, he noticed three people in there with him, almost unnaturaly still. he took a step towards the first one and realised he had been standing in a pool of knee-deep water. Trudging through the water he again began to make his way towards the person, who suddenly came alive once he reached her. "what is your name, little hearthling?" asked the person. The man thought about this for a moment... "markus" he said. "my name is markus." the strange womans eyes glowed for a moment, than she was still again. "i guess thats my name now." markus said to himself. He stepped out of the water and made his way towards a chest that was nearby. inside were some cloths, a torch, and a hat. Mark looked down, and noticed that he was naked. He hurriedly took out the cloths and put them on, as well as the wooden shoes and cap, placing the torch in his pocket. Now that he was dressed, he avoided the murky pool he had awoken in, and walked to the next person. Much like the first lady, she suddenly came alive after he reached her, however her question was quite different. "would you like to change your gender?" she said, without turning to look at him. He took a step back, "uuuh... no thanks, im fine as it is..." he took a step too far back and slammed his back into the wall of the cave. There was only one person left, standing in the corner. "lets see what this person has to say..." Markus said softly under his breath as he approached the last man. And, sure enough, like the others he suddenly came to life as soon as markus approached him. "please tell me a password" the man said in the deepest voice seemingly possible. Markus thought over this for a moment. what password? after a moment the man became still again. He dident know what to make of this place, and turned around again. There was a rope ladder there, leading into a hole in the roof of the cave. He walked over to it and tugged on it for a moment. It seemed sturdy enough. "i hope this takes me out of here" mark thought, and began climbing the rope. 'he climbed it for quite some time, after several minutes he could see no visible light anywhere above him, so he looked down. The light of the cave was only a spec in the distance. Then he noticed something. He had stopped climbing, but was still continuing to rise. The cave light suddenly disapeared, and Mark was left only with the sensation of rising. Very, Very quickly. And, After a few moments of this, he blacked out, and continued to rise.
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