My song

[Agarrett]

I wrote a song this morning and I would like to share it with you:

http://www.noteflight.com/scores/view/2 ... 8b31d8f42a

I'm only 13, so please no harsh comments on simplicity.

[Froggeryz]

my ears

[Agarrett]

Does anyone like it?

[Lightning2]

Decent, in my opinion, but definitly doesn't fit in Haven & Hearth if you were planning that.

[Loopoo]

It's kinda horrible mate, sorry...It has no rhythm, it just...spurts out horrible notes. The notes didn't compliment each other.

Now, i'm no musician, but I do have some basic knowledge of making music. But good start, keep at it and i'm sure pretty darn quick you'll be making songs as good as Kaka's in no time

[btaylor]

It's kinda horrible mate, sorry...It has no rhythm, it just...spurts out horrible notes. The notes didn't compliment each other.

To me it sounded like the same notes over and over.

[Apostata]

Rubbish

[bajuba]

best song ever

[Agarrett]

It isn't meant for Haven and Hearth, it is just a song I wrote.

[kimya]

the rythm is cool, really. it sounds a bit strange but thats due to the program, i guess. dont let them stop you from doing what you like!!!

/edit
or maybe my soundsystem. theres a glitch in the system. i need contact spray.