by Neptjunoue » Sat Aug 21, 2010 11:11 am
A bit of input:
- Although you show the readers how to combat each individual animals, there are some cases it may be hard for them especially dealing with the highest tier animal. Tell them what to do with particularly strong version of each if they are struggling. The level range should state that the low range is for the weakest version while the high range should be for the highest tier.
- A FAQ is missing. Readers will have questions for you as well you questions while they are putting these knowledge to the test. Take note of the questions asked here as well as the "How do I?" and perhaps other sections of the forum if you find them.
- A mention about armor is deserved as well as it is a buffer for people to make mistakes. The explanation of the armor system would be nice as well.
- Consider re-reading, proofreading and polishing some of your sentence throughout the guides. A few are a bit choppy because of the constant added content.
Reaper, Reaper, that's what people call me! Why?
Cause they all die! When I sing, I end their lives
You act as though payback makes you a noble man
Is that a fact? Well, you're a goddamn Philistine!