Legacy of Ravenborn - Chapter 1

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Re: Legacy of Ravenborn - Chapter 1

Postby Redlaw » Sat Feb 18, 2017 8:02 am

Glad to yours up and going again, I should have started mine a few weeks ago... being lazy on that, but not in game, as things are if I start next week the wold will be younger and all that good shit lol.
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Re: Legacy of Ravenborn - Chapter 1

Postby maze » Sat Feb 18, 2017 8:15 am

Redlaw wrote:Glad to yours up and going again, I should have started mine a few weeks ago... being lazy on that, but not in game, as things are if I start next week the wold will be younger and all that good shit lol.

All the story tellers are being lazy this world :]
I blame flame.
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Re: Legacy of Ravenborn - Chapter 1

Postby Redlaw » Sat Feb 18, 2017 8:59 am

maze wrote:
Redlaw wrote:Glad to yours up and going again, I should have started mine a few weeks ago... being lazy on that, but not in game, as things are if I start next week the wold will be younger and all that good shit lol.

All the story tellers are being lazy this world :]
I blame flame.


I blame the fact that the start of a world tends to be shit. This world has not been as nasty as the last few, I have not read any of the amount of random groups just wanting to cause issues cause they could. Means any story teller once well set, is good, as I am not cleaning up my tree planting area atm, like I was at this point time line wise on my claim... plus the eztra fun things the devs have added. ya should be more fun lol. Well among other reasons hehe.


But Dani hear has tended to be the first the herald, so far its time damn time. Thuse since he started its just flat damn time...
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Re: Legacy of Ravenborn - Chapter 1

Postby GamingRAM » Sat Feb 18, 2017 2:21 pm

I am interested to see how this story is told. There are always two sides to a story and from my perspective (having being there), a lot of this is just flowery language and some inconsistencies. For example, he didn't have a dream, he had an idea given to him before the end of last world (I should know, I was the one who pitched it to him in the first place).

This isn't a story of a man living out his days on the top of a mountain. This is a story of a man who perhaps didn't want to be king but found joy in it, of betrayal, of theft, of death, of lack of trust. Hell there's even a few spies in the midst.

Pretty story-telling as always, but for the other readers here, unlike last time this isn't an isolated story, there are many parties involved with many different perspectives outside the ones written here.
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Re: Legacy of Ravenborn - Chapter 1

Postby snooboo » Sat Feb 18, 2017 4:08 pm

GamingRAM wrote:I am interested to see how this story is told. There are always two sides to a story and from my perspective (having being there), a lot of this is just flowery language and some inconsistencies. For example, he didn't have a dream, he had an idea given to him before the end of last world (I should know, I was the one who pitched it to him in the first place).

This isn't a story of a man living out his days on the top of a mountain. This is a story of a man who perhaps didn't want to be king but found joy in it, of betrayal, of theft, of death, of lack of trust. Hell there's even a few spies in the midst.


As one of the perspectives and as one who connected with others involved, I would say that there was no betrayal, theft, or death on his side. Lack of trust there certainly was but that was directed at someone else by the masses. Death was not brought about because of Wulfkin, but because of someone selfish and misguided.

On the idea thing, sure it's great that you maybe thought of it, but you obviously couldn't pull it off successfully. I think you also forgot that jealousy was in there and true, they were all from one man but that man wasn't Wulfkin.

Please take your sorry butt elsewhere and let readers enjoy storytelling by a famed storyteller.
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Re: Legacy of Ravenborn - Chapter 1

Postby GamingRAM » Sat Feb 18, 2017 4:30 pm

snooboo wrote:
GamingRAM wrote:I am interested to see how this story is told. There are always two sides to a story and from my perspective (having being there), a lot of this is just flowery language and some inconsistencies. For example, he didn't have a dream, he had an idea given to him before the end of last world (I should know, I was the one who pitched it to him in the first place).

This isn't a story of a man living out his days on the top of a mountain. This is a story of a man who perhaps didn't want to be king but found joy in it, of betrayal, of theft, of death, of lack of trust. Hell there's even a few spies in the midst.


As one of the perspectives and as one who connected with others involved, I would say that there was no betrayal, theft, or death on his side. Lack of trust there certainly was but that was directed at someone else by the masses. Death was not brought about because of Wulfkin, but because of someone selfish and misguided.

On the idea thing, sure it's great that you maybe thought of it, but you obviously couldn't pull it off successfully. I think you also forgot that jealousy was in there and true, they were all from one man but that man wasn't Wulfkin.

Please take your sorry butt elsewhere and let readers enjoy storytelling by a famed storyteller.



Like I said, there are always two sides to a story. There are many perspectives. Who said anything about me wanting to run a kingdom? Because I certainly didn't.

Also, "famed storyteller"? Personal attacks? Your first post? Smh.
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Re: Legacy of Ravenborn - Chapter 1

Postby MysteriousBenefactor » Sat Feb 18, 2017 5:22 pm

oh but there's indeed a lot of betrayal in this story

this scrub thought he could outsmart us but kek
we were going to do it all through pms but apparently it will be funnier to just drop this here and join the fun. dani sorry for the derail we shall pm you with the details

ladies and gentlemen we present you ramz 2 of emerald city, conspirator:

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Re: Legacy of Ravenborn - Chapter 1

Postby GamingRAM » Sat Feb 18, 2017 5:56 pm

MysteriousBenefactor wrote:oh but there's indeed a lot of betrayal in this story

this scrub thought he could outsmart us but kek
we were going to do it all through pms but apparently it will be funnier to just drop this here and join the fun. dani sorry for the derail we shall pm you with the details

ladies and gentlemen we present you ramz 2 of emerald city, conspirator:



Instead of cherrypicking, how about you show the whole truth? I didn't give you any information because I'm not that low. If it wasn't obvious, I lied about my intentions to try to get some information on you. And Dani can contest to this, as I've told him myself.

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Re: Legacy of Ravenborn - Chapter 1

Postby jackjoke » Sat Feb 18, 2017 6:15 pm

GamingRAM, Nobody cares.

I've killed people from the North kingdom.
But your story is a sap story.

Even if I meet Dani now.
I won't kill him in hopes you cry more here.
HELL! I'll take a screenshot of me dancing with him just for you.
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Re: Legacy of Ravenborn - Chapter 1

Postby GamingRAM » Sat Feb 18, 2017 6:20 pm

jackjoke wrote:GamingRAM, Nobody cares.

I've killed people from the North kingdom.
But your story is a sap story.

Even if I meet Dani now.
I won't kill him in hopes you cry more here.
HELL! I'll take a screenshot of me dancing with him just for you.
#saltforkids


Okaaaay....? Hope you have fun.
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