uroyoan wrote:The review looks pretty good. There's a couple of mistakes in the grammar, for example: "Ethernal Alpha stage" should be "Eternal alpha stage". Personally, I do not find haven and hearth that hard to get into compared to when I started back in world 6 or so. It does seem a'lot more beginner friendly. Instead of saying that the game is so unintuitive you are forced to use the wiki, and saying it takes hours to figure out the simplest of things, you should just say that it has a steep learning curve and leave it at that. You want to tell them that the game is hard to learn, not frustrating. The game is literally not hard to learn in my opinion, its just different from the rest so it takes time to get adjusted to.
You should also add in, that the game will reset on January 8th, so that people who start playing now will know when to start playing. You should add this at the start review and make it sound exciting. This will get players who basically like competitiveness side of games to jump right in. While showing peaceful players that since the game just started, there will be a lack of power abusers.
Thx, I'll try to do my best, English is not my first language. I would like this to be a community made thing, so feel free to edit the review,add or change some stuff....then I'll make a final version and when we all are agree about I'll post it on reddit, and you all are free to spam it everywhere you like.
Moreover if you have nice pics, default client, cam ortho, max graphic and a good resolution post them in here to be added to the review.....try to post pics related to the review, for example when i speak about the Spitroast, a nice pic of you spitrosting over a fire,etc...