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Ode' of Haven

Postby LadyV » Wed Mar 30, 2016 2:39 pm

A Valkyrie' Prayer

Helm bright and new,
Armor brilliant blue,
Spear and shield wondrous hue.

She sits writing poem,
The warrior in her soul,
Brave and bold.

Her tears ink most dear,
Lavish stories most fear,
Her heart draws near.

Tossing pen in air,
To foot she stands,
Defiance she smiles.

Hurling forth she soars,
Down to Midgard past sleeping boars,
She finds his heart as she once again opens doors.

Whispering what the heart weeps,
She watches as he sleeps,
Their lips touch the precious things one keeps.

Lifting her love she flys,
Yggdrasil she lands,
Resting her warrior in life hands.

Spear cuts deep,
Her tears fall,
A mixture to all.

This she offers the tree so great,
"Hear me O life,
Giver of soul."

"This life a piece of the whole,
Gives you to grow,
Thrive so love knows."

"To my sisters up high,
I say this be my battle,
Be it forever or ney"

"It is the battle this heart faces,
Be my destiny Valhalla or Hel,
Love is my cause."

"Stand fast with your sister,
Or watch in your halls,
This soul stands."

"Fight with me,
Spear and shield,
For this heart does not yield."

"Odin or Hel I say this to you,
This soul is mine,
Come fight me if you must.'

"Should your spear gain the winning thrust,
I do trust,
You will do what you must."

"But know you Valhalla or Hel,
This heart does not yield."

Her spear held strong,
Shield held taught,
Eyes watchful.

At her feet her warrior sleeps.
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Re: Ode' of Haven

Postby pedorlee » Wed Mar 30, 2016 2:42 pm

Bravo.

Nice ode or poem.
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Re: Ode' of Haven

Postby DaniAngione » Wed Mar 30, 2016 4:21 pm

Beautiful!
Skaldr shall be singing this across the land after battles and glory
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Re: Ode' of Haven

Postby Ysh » Wed Mar 30, 2016 4:27 pm

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Re: Ode' of Haven

Postby Amanda44 » Wed Mar 30, 2016 4:49 pm

Nice V, - it made me think of this;

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Though he is not sleeping. :)
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Re: Ode' of Haven

Postby LadyV » Thu Mar 31, 2016 7:16 pm

@pedorlee, DaniAngione

Thank you I'm glad you liked it.

@Amanda

Nice picture. :)
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Re: Ode' of Haven

Postby shubla » Thu Mar 31, 2016 7:17 pm

Jorb and loftar,
they are two clever gnomes,
giving Hearthlings homes.

I much of them admire,
but one thing is dire,
why cant I get a buff from wine?
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Re: Ode' of Haven

Postby Teleskop » Thu Mar 31, 2016 7:20 pm

jorb is skinny
loftar is fat
i bought a 5$ hat
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Re: Ode' of Haven

Postby wolf1000wolf » Thu Mar 31, 2016 7:36 pm

Teleskop wrote:jorb is skinny
loftar is fat
i bought a 5$ hat


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Good compositions from everyone but this one made me actually lol.
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Re: Ode' of Haven

Postby DaniAngione » Thu Mar 31, 2016 8:39 pm

Roses are red
Violets are blue
Is that a murder scent?
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