My song

Agarrett · Post by **Agarrett** » Fri Nov 06, 2009 3:28 pm

I wrote a song this morning and I would like to share it with you:

http://www.noteflight.com/scores/view/2 ... 8b31d8f42a

I'm only 13, so please no harsh comments on simplicity.

Froggeryz · Post by **Froggeryz** » Fri Nov 06, 2009 4:04 pm

my ears

Agarrett · Post by **Agarrett** » Fri Nov 06, 2009 4:13 pm

Does anyone like it?

Lightning2 · Post by **Lightning2** » Fri Nov 06, 2009 4:25 pm

Decent, in my opinion, but definitly doesn't fit in Haven & Hearth if you were planning that.

Loopoo · Post by **Loopoo** » Fri Nov 06, 2009 5:19 pm

It's kinda horrible mate, sorry...It has no rhythm, it just...spurts out horrible notes. The notes didn't compliment each other.

Now, i'm no musician, but I do have some basic knowledge of making music. But good start, keep at it and i'm sure pretty darn quick you'll be making songs as good as Kaka's in no time

btaylor · Post by **btaylor** » Fri Nov 06, 2009 7:01 pm

Loopoo wrote:It's kinda horrible mate, sorry...It has no rhythm, it just...spurts out horrible notes. The notes didn't compliment each other.

To me it sounded like the same notes over and over.

Apostata · Post by **Apostata** » Fri Nov 06, 2009 7:44 pm

Rubbish

bajuba · Post by **bajuba** » Fri Nov 06, 2009 8:02 pm

best song ever

Agarrett · Post by **Agarrett** » Sat Nov 07, 2009 12:28 am

It isn't meant for Haven and Hearth, it is just a song I wrote.

kimya · Post by **kimya** » Sat Nov 07, 2009 12:38 am

the rythm is cool, really. it sounds a bit strange but thats due to the program, i guess. dont let them stop you from doing what you like!!!

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or maybe my soundsystem. theres a glitch in the system. i need contact spray.

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