Jorb and Loftar Gods of Two,
please accept my prayer to you,
although I bear you no ill will,
these bears look at me intent to kill,
The wounds I suffer take their toll,
on my body and my soul
So please Jorb and Loftar and hear my plea,
heal these wounds I beg of thee.
A prayer from David of Carlin
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Leusoj
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Re: Prayer to the Two Gods
You forgot the wounds. Gimp that to massive bloodletting, and you might have something. 
<Marcher Lord>
Dogs! Oh god, please give us DOGS!
There are those who press on with the ardor of beer, and those who are faint with thirst.
Dogs! Oh god, please give us DOGS!
There are those who press on with the ardor of beer, and those who are faint with thirst.
